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Monday, September 13, 2021

My own planet

 



 
 For inquiry we got to draw our own planet mine saw called icing fire. It has a big rig around. It's blue and red.There is blue and red on one side and red and blue on the other side. It has red and blue smock coming of it. 




2 comments:

  1. Hello Pippa, I love your planet. I like you did blue on one side and pink on the other. It reminds me of candy. Next time you could add more description about it.

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  2. Hey Pippa, I love your planet because if you live there and were too hot you could go to the other side of the planet where it was cold, and if your too cold you could go to the hot side. This makes me think about the time I saw a cool looking picture of mars on a website I found. Maybe next time you could make the ring a bit wider.

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